Lyrics help/critiques?

Ive been feeling a little down recently and i tried my hand at letting
this out through some lyrics. These are definitely not finished yet. I
just jotted these down in about 30 mins to an hour. i tried to break
it up so that you can somewhat hear a beat when you read it line be
line.
I don't want an answer thats just these are good/bad. I want an honest
evaluation of them. Why you like/dislike it and how you could possibly
improve them. Thank You in advance for those of you that try to help

You don't know what its like
Praying that this is the end
End of the pain
End of the shame
End of the lying,
The cheating, its all the same

You broke my heart
Now im on the roof
With my life's only friend
A quarter bottle of gin

The concrete looks soft
And im ready to fall
I take one last swig
Now im pushing me off

My parents'll be sad
But know its their fault
No love was shown
Always a burden
No more problems
This will happen
Last line edit: Yeah this will happen